Spy Poem

robinabo · 03-11-2009, 03:21 AM

I decided to write a random poem about a spy one day. Make fun of it, flame it, I don't really mind. It was written in less than a minute so add a comment if you like.
The Daily Life of a Spy
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Iggy · 03-11-2009, 10:19 PM

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And he paid for his stupidity with death

I would have used the word "blindness", rather than "stupidity".... but otherwise, well written.

Is that a writers website? I haven't looked around it, but I am a writer myself(although, I don't write poetry).

robinabo · 03-11-2009, 11:03 PM

Yes it's a writer website. You can publish anything as long as you are the original maker.

fishBurger · 03-11-2009, 11:08 PM

Amusing. I enjoyed it.

robinabo · 03-12-2009, 02:13 AM

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Originally Posted by Iggy

I would have used the word "blindness", rather than "stupidity".... but otherwise, well written.

I've changed stupidity to blindness. Thanks for the suggestion.

GeoKill-----> · 03-12-2009, 03:31 AM

why was this move? :/

Anyways nice poem

zSilver_Fox · 03-12-2009, 05:00 AM

I'm a pretentious asshole, I can't read a poem with no meter. That or I fail at scantion.

Iggy · 03-13-2009, 09:29 PM

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Originally Posted by robinabo

I've changed stupidity to blindness. Thanks for the suggestion.

No problem. I'm thinking I'll put a couple of my older stories on there. It would make them easily accessable.
Thanks for pointing out that website.

Hype · 03-14-2009, 05:37 PM

loolllolooollololoool poems

03-11-2009, 03:21 AM	#1
robinabo Special Weapons & Tactics Join Date: Mar 2009 Gametype: Capture the Flag Posts Rated Helpful 0 Times	Spy Poem I decided to write a random poem about a spy one day. Make fun of it, flame it, I don't really mind. It was written in less than a minute so add a comment if you like. The Daily Life of a Spy If you feel this random poem deserves mention then comment on it with a post

03-11-2009, 11:08 PM	#4
fishBurger get off my lawn Join Date: Mar 2007 Class/Position: O scout / demo Gametype: killing Posts Rated Helpful 0 Times	Amusing. I enjoyed it. __________________ That means that either you are an American, or you are NOT an American. There is no hyphenated exception. -Iggy

03-12-2009, 03:31 AM	#6
GeoKill-----> Community Member Server Owner Beta Tester Forum Moderator Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Hawthorne, California Class/Position: Soldier/Spy/Scout Gametype: AvD Affiliations: :e0:Eternal Order Leader Posts Rated Helpful 12 Times	why was this move? :/ Anyways nice poem __________________ Fortress-Forever Guides All Your Mapping Needs :e0: Will live on Forever Support FF:

03-12-2009, 05:00 AM	#7
zSilver_Fox IRL Combat Medic Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Ethanol Land Class/Position: D Medic Gametype: Conca Jumping Affiliations: ^iv Posts Rated Helpful 0 Times	I'm a pretentious asshole, I can't read a poem with no meter. That or I fail at scantion. __________________ I have a nasopharyngeal and webcam... First infraction! Flaming!

03-14-2009, 05:37 PM	#9
Hype Don't believe the hype D&A Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Holland Class/Position: Both Gametype: CTF Posts Rated Helpful 0 Times	loolllolooollololoool poems __________________ I'm back! who cares? In-game: Flow.

03-11-2009, 11:03 PM	#3
robinabo Special Weapons & Tactics Join Date: Mar 2009 Gametype: Capture the Flag Posts Rated Helpful 0 Times	Yes it's a writer website. You can publish anything as long as you are the original maker.

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