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XPelargos · 10-23-2012, 09:26 AM

You wrote "Best game IN ever made" towards the beginning.

Don't call TF2 garbage from the get go. WE GET IT! TF2 WAS NOT WHAT WE WERE HOPING FOR FROM VALVE! BUT EVERY TIME YOU REFERENCE IT YOU PISS OFF THE PEOPLE WHO ENJOY IT, WHICH IS THE VERY SAME GROUP YOU ARE TRYING TO ATTRACT!

I would break it up with class descriptions, then some info about the class.

Don't do:

WALL OF TEXT

WALL OF YOUTUBES

Pacing, son. You know how it be.

Perhaps some pictures of the classes as well?

Paste the AcidReniX tutorial about bhopping. Not only is it imformative, but ARX has a very soothing voice.

10-23-2012, 09:26 AM	#2
XPelargos I like to spam binds Beta Tester Join Date: May 2009 Class/Position: Scoooooot Gametype: Capture the Flag Posts Rated Helpful 73 Times	You wrote "Best game IN ever made" towards the beginning. Don't call TF2 garbage from the get go. WE GET IT! TF2 WAS NOT WHAT WE WERE HOPING FOR FROM VALVE! BUT EVERY TIME YOU REFERENCE IT YOU PISS OFF THE PEOPLE WHO ENJOY IT, WHICH IS THE VERY SAME GROUP YOU ARE TRYING TO ATTRACT! I would break it up with class descriptions, then some info about the class. Don't do: WALL OF TEXT WALL OF YOUTUBES Pacing, son. You know how it be. Perhaps some pictures of the classes as well? Paste the AcidReniX tutorial about bhopping. Not only is it imformative, but ARX has a very soothing voice.