Be more concise with your descriptions. No one will want to read paragraphs about games. Games are meant to be played.
State what something is i.e. rampsliding then show video example. Another example: HEY SOLDIER IS COOL HE SHOOT ROCKETS [Insert youtube video of soldier shit].
Don't complain about snipers and pyros. Keep the post positive and word your sentences in a positive way i.e. Pyro is a good beginning class not Pyro is a class made for noobs.
POSITIVE MAKES PEOPLE HAPPY. HAPPY PEOPLE PLAY. NEGATIVE MAKES RAGE. RAGES MAKES QUIT.
Nice work, though. Hopefully it will be worth the effort.
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